Needless words
Lingua Franca 2016-05-20
I know I've been a long-time critic of everything in The Elements of Style, not least William Strunk's platitude that you should omit needless words. "Needless" is not defined even vaguely; nobody really writes in a way that sticks to the absolute minimum word count; and if neophyte writers could tell what was needless they wouldn't have to be handed this platitude (which they don't really know how to use anyway). But every now and then one really does see a case of a word that screams at you that it should have been left out. The University of Oxford has an official form on which this is the heading:
CLAIM FOR REIMBURSEMENT OF ALLOWABLE EXPENSES
You saw it too? Yes. My bet is that they do not bother to have a form for reimbursement of the other kind of expenses.
This is the most plangent case of a needless word I have seen recently. But comments are left open below just in case you have a challenger…